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Friday, November 4, 2011

Comments For Kids

This story is very interesting. I have never imagined what it might be like being toast and being eaten.
http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/DrakeB12/how-toast-got-toasted/

I like the detail you put into your post it really allows you to imagine you were there doing it.
http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/AshleyS51/my-summer-2/

You really show how much you understand the assignment and make me want to read what you've written.
http://noellakin.blogspot.com/2011/10/creative-writing.html#comments

Gavin your reasons for writing are very constructive and learning orientated.
http://noelgavin.blogspot.com/2011/10/why-i-write.html#comment-form

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