Friday, November 4, 2011

Comments For Kids

This story is very interesting. I have never imagined what it might be like being toast and being eaten.

I like the detail you put into your post it really allows you to imagine you were there doing it.

You really show how much you understand the assignment and make me want to read what you've written.

Gavin your reasons for writing are very constructive and learning orientated.

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